Wednesday, August 5, 2009

One of Our Own

Arcadia is a small town and many who live and work within its precincts may feel like family. But that's still not a good reason to write a headline in the first person. If this is the writer's headline, readers have to wonder why the editor endorsed it.

1 comment:

  1. It would also be a much better headline if they pulled on her platform for the subhead; there's plenty of space.